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Equestria Divided: Cult additional forces by *PoorYorickDA
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Hurricane's fall to madness by ~catxborsuq
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Under Your Muzzle                I rushed as fast as I could to the location that the witness spoke of. The whole time I galloped, I was thinking to myself, “We finally got him! We finally caught Commander Bolt!
As I rush up to the sight I could already see a few of my soldiers waiting for me, so I asked, “Where is he? Did you get him?”
They both shook their heads as one spoke, “Captain Armor… the neighbors say he left this morning, they said he was on his way into the Griffin Kingdoms from here. If this is true then he’s probably crossed the border by now.”
Once again, I was just plain ticked off. Princess Celestia ordered me to bring him to her weeks ago… but so far, I haven’t even seen his face yet. All I have are rumors and witness descriptions of him.
                One pony from Trottingham says he is a tall buff alicornUnder Your Muzzle by *Priceless911
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Under Your Muzzle                I rushed as fast as I could to the location that the witness spoke of. The whole time I galloped, I was thinking to myself, “We finally got him! We finally caught Commander Bolt!
As I rush up to the sight I could already see a few of my soldiers waiting for me, so I asked, “Where is he? Did you get him?”
They both shook their heads as one spoke, “Captain Armor… the neighbors say he left this morning, they said he was on his way into the Griffin Kingdoms from here. If this is true then he’s probably crossed the border by now.”
Once again, I was just plain ticked off. Princess Celestia ordered me to bring him to her weeks ago… but so far, I haven’t even seen his face yet. All I have are rumors and witness descriptions of him.
                One pony from Trottingham says he is a tall buff alicorn
Under Your Muzzle
by *Priceless911

Interesting side-story, it's nice to see another piece of your work, as the last time I read one was around Jan 2. I have quite the cat...

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The Difference Ch13Chapter 13
Closer
             “LUNA!!!”
Nightmare Moon turned around to see Traipse standing there with a look of anger on his face, “Well, well, it’s been a long time hasn’t it, Colonel… tell me, how many years since the fall of the Crystal Empire? Twenty years, right?”
Traipse shook his head, “Try Thirty.”
Nightmare Moon smiled, “Wow, thirty years, and you’ve seem to age well. May I ask your secret?”
“Hatred… my hatred to you, your sister, your kingdom, and Commander Mist. You took everything from me, my loyalty to my king, my home and everything I was raised to know and understand about this world. Its because of that hatred I’ve stayed away from Equestria and never wanted to return here.”
              Nightmare Moon use
The Difference Ch13
by *Priceless911

I read it hours before but I was tired to but a response, overall, it's a decent story. Really showed "The Difference" to when Starbolt...

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The Difference Ch11Chapter 11
Commander Bolt's Legacy
              Commander Bolt stood at the top of a tower in the middle of Canterlot watching the horizon; Pearl flew up and spoke, “Mom? Is there any sign of him yet?”
Commander Bolt turned around and replied, “No… I'm getting worried; it’s not like him to take this long.”
Pearl smiled, “Its ok mom, Sable is the fastest land messenger pony in Equestria remember, if anypony can get there and back without being seen by the Nightmare Legion, its him. He probably just took a nap in a field like last time.”
Commander Bolt smiled, “I know, it’s just that every time I think about you two, I see those two little foals who stayed as brave as they could when we were being threatened by that pegasus from my foal hood.”
            
The Difference Ch11
by *Priceless911

Well well, that's quite the surprise. Gem Bolt picks up the Star Bolt legacy by being its new Commander Bolt, what an interesting diffe...

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An Ancestors Promise                All the zebra gathered for this year’s Placement Trial. Each year all the young zebras who have yet to find their place in the tribe will gather for a ritual that places each one in a set of tests. Here they will find their inner most talents and earn their place amongst the tribe, not to mention their placement marks which will appear on their flank as soon as their talents are discovered. This day was the very day that the young Zecora had been waiting for her entire life. Every day she has counted down waiting for her chance to show her skills in magic, something that very few zebra of the northern tribe ever get to do.
                As the young zebra finished lining up, the Zebra chief trotted up to the podium and announced, “Brothers! Sisters! Both young and old! Today we are gathered here for a very sp
An Ancestors Promise
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Pretty good story, really explains about Zecora's involvement in the events of "Tear of the Fallen Star", good sentence structured and ...

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~Toshihirohei Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thx for the fav :D
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~LazyGamer313 Nov 22, 2012
Your welcome man :D
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~bibliodragon Oct 29, 2012
Thanks for the fave. :blowkiss:
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~LazyGamer313 Oct 31, 2012
No worries, it is a nice piece of work after all. Keep up the good work!
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~Catspaw-DTP-Services Sep 17, 2012  Professional
Thanks for the favorite! :-)
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Mood: Happy ~LazyGamer313 Sep 18, 2012
No worries, I read your fanfic "The Farmer in the Dell" a long while back and I enjoyed it. Now that i'm more active on deviantart as of the late, I figured i'll add favs on my account so that hopefully I won't forget about them.

Anyhow really nice work with "The Farmer in the Dell", you did a good job on it. Best regards man.
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~Catspaw-DTP-Services Sep 18, 2012  Professional
Same to you! I’m glad you’ve enjoyed the writing. Take a look around my galleries—particularly “Ponies” and “Pony Tales”—to see if anything else strikes your fancy.
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*Engrishman Sep 16, 2012
Thank you very much for the watch! :iconhurrplz:
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